請問一句英文文法

書上的句子和翻譯
One can as easily become a chemist or a neuroanatomist because of where one went to school
or whose influence one happened to come under as because of a compelling early response to
the logic of chemistry or the beauty of the human nervous system.
參考譯文：正如化學的機理和人類神經系統的完美能激發人早期自發的反應一樣，人同
樣容易受到上學的地點和某位人士的影響，從而成為化學家或者神經解剖學家。
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chefchandanny

這句話的結構其實比較複雜，因為它用了一種相對較少見的對比結構來表示兩種成為「化學家或神經解剖學家」的不同原因：外在影響（例如學校或人際影響）和內在動機（例如對學科本身的興趣）。

原句分析
原句：

One can as easily become a chemist or a neuroanatomist because of where one went to school or whose influence one happened to come under as because of a compelling early response to the logic of chemistry or the beauty of the human nervous system.
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stationaryery

我覺得裡面的用法確實怪怪的，不過有可能是翻譯文章，所以有些過程會有訛誤的情形。

eynyeee

前面大大有說過 沒有對稱

as easy as
as easily as  第一句後面接 become   第二次出現 後面接上 because of   

其實 整個看起來怪怪的  我不是那個領域的  也不是外國人  但是我覺得 那句怪怪的 where  的用法也奇怪  

這可能是學術論文出來的 但是寫的人 就不知道是什麼等級了!  我也是長知識了!
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avontube

I would only guess that, the sentence can be extracted from a research paper, which was written by a person who badly needs an English editing service.

ohmoto_tw

這句子有點長，需要分解一下：

One can as easily become a chemist or a neuroanatomist because of XXX

XXX =  "where one went to school or whose influence one happened to come under as because of a compelling early response to the logic of chemistry or the beauty of the human nervous system."

where one went to school or whose influence one happened to come under as because of YYY
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kingpopo0505

One can as easily become a chemist or a neuroanatomist because of where one went to school　or whose influence one happened to come under as because of a compelling early response to the logic of chemistry or the beauty of the human nervous system.
這句子用了Because of兩個連接句子，這在翻譯上會將最初始的來源倒裝，因為他一開始強調的是最後的because of a compelling early response to the logic of chemistry or the beauty of the human nervous system. 所以這段句子是整段文字最開始的原由，因為(正如)"什麼什麼”,同樣(和)”什麼什麼”，第二個同樣就是第一句的because of where one went to school　or whose influence one happened to come under as，最後的結語One can as easily become a chemist or a neuroanatomist就是一開始的主要結論，因為A + because of B就是：一個因為B的原因發生了A的結尾，主要解析是這樣。...

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bjl1212

句子太長了，這也是寫作缺點，整句完全不知想說甚麼

roychang1210

這段英文文法怪怪的，子句不對稱，有介系詞卻沒受詞，而去接了副詞? 看起來好像是中文拿去給google翻譯出來的。

aocaoc

你的翻譯沒有錯啊，但是他的語氣意思是早期的學習啊

antonius

這個應該是私人文件吧? 有人英文這樣寫的嗎?

可以列出書名和其它節錄的範文?